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Change: stuck his foot in the earth. When asking about the antidote to the poison, Cooper laughed and said there iswasn't one.Oliver then shot him multiple times in the chest.
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Change: floor. Ramsey pushed Cooper over, and stuck his foot in the earth,earth. beforeWhen Oliverasking about the antidote to the poison, Cooper laughed and said there is one.Oliver then shot him multiple times.times in the chest.
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Change: clean up. Cooper then arrived...arrived and stopped their plans, shoving Oliver to ground. Kelly took a shot at him, but missed and was also hurled to floor. Ramsey pushed Cooper over, and stuck his foot in the earth, before Oliver then shot him multiple times.
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Change: into a wooded area and began to look for them. VII. MoreUntitledThe willthree comeeventually asended itup teaming up against Cooper and made their way to a petrol station to clean up. Cooper then happens!arrived...
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Change: pedophile"pedophile" by the name of Ramsey Fox.V. Ramsey's HouseThe pair arrived at Ramsey's house and entered, guns raised. There was a slight confrontation, which ended up with Kelly
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Change: Oliver followed Ramsey and Kelly onto the highway, and pulled up alongside them. He pulled the trigger on his gun, but no shots were fired.
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Change: pedophile"pedophile" by the name of Ramsey Fox.V. Ramsey's HouseThe pair arrived at Ramsey's house and entered, guns raised. There was a slight confrontation, which ended up with Kelly
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Change: Oliver followed Kelly out of the restaurant and into a side alley, intent on stealing the fifty dollars Ramsey had given her to use for
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Change: Characters changeInvolved the(in sizeorder of your photo by clicking on it once to highlight it, then by clicking the "plus" or "minus" sign in the "Edit Image"appearence):Kelly toolbox.BourneOliver WhenBarrowcliffRamsey you'reFox- allwill done,update savelater your- page.
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